Howdy there. I’ve noticed you’ve been popping up on many Ness threads that are currently available. Which begs the question, are you perhaps knowledgeable on Earthbound? Or are you just that hyped up that Pre-Magicant Ness defeated a really haxed Bunny?
Ok I swear I replied on my wall yesterday but FANDOM keeps swallowing my comment up. It has some grammar issues (make the first 'Bonetail' in the summary bold, put a space between Size Manipulation and its explanation, use capital letters at the start of bracket explanations, bring Bite down a line in notable attacks/techniques), and some things I'd question otherwise (he can be solid High 4-C instead of likely, for his powers and abilities add Breath Attack and remove his resistances, lifting strength needs a better justification). Otherwise it's fine.