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Classification: Origin of The Starry Sky is a title he gained because of recreating the universe, but it has nothing to do with him as a classification about what he is. Fourth Step Cultivator is something he surpassed, and would be like using "prince" as a classification for a king because he was a prince before being crowned.
 
Classification: Origin of The Starry Sky is a title he gained because of recreating the universe, but it has nothing to do with him as a classification about what he is. Fourth Step Cultivator is something he surpassed, and would be like using "prince" as a classification for a king because he was a prince before being crowned.
   
Powers and Abilities, there are grammatical errors like: "connecting their fate he connected with" repeats connecting one time too many; "Resistance To Transmutation" has an unneeded ly capitalized "To"; "Invulnerability (Each of their defenses and attacks contain essence, making them immune to any normal attack" should have "they" changed to "him"; "Acausality (Type 5) Nigh-Omnipresence" has an apostrophe missing.
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Powers and Abilities, there are grammatical errors like: "connecting their fate he connected with" repeats connecting one time too many; "Resistance To Transmutation" has an unneededly capitalized "To"; "Invulnerability (Each of their defenses and attacks contain essence, making them immune to any normal attack" should have "they" changed to "him"; "Acausality (Type 5) Nigh-Omnipresence" has an apostrophe missing.
   
 
Intelligence: No error, just feel that adding that he lived for millions of years, and that he understand every one of the infinite concepts and laws that make up reality would be needed. (This only applies to his last key)
 
Intelligence: No error, just feel that adding that he lived for millions of years, and that he understand every one of the infinite concepts and laws that make up reality would be needed. (This only applies to his last key)

Latest revision as of 18:46, June 26, 2019

Bai Xiaochun (Eternal World) got a lot of problems, some of which I swear weren't there when I uploaded it.

If you'd open it, I'd be willing to change the following myself:

Name: Several are unneeded, and many outdated names were added for no particular reason. This include Little Turtle, Sect Uncel Bai, Nightcript, Nightdevil, Plaguedevil, Blood Lord, Junior Patriarch, Devil Bai, Bai Hao and Inspections Commissioner.

Classification: Origin of The Starry Sky is a title he gained because of recreating the universe, but it has nothing to do with him as a classification about what he is. Fourth Step Cultivator is something he surpassed, and would be like using "prince" as a classification for a king because he was a prince before being crowned.

Powers and Abilities, there are grammatical errors like: "connecting their fate he connected with" repeats connecting one time too many; "Resistance To Transmutation" has an unneededly capitalized "To"; "Invulnerability (Each of their defenses and attacks contain essence, making them immune to any normal attack" should have "they" changed to "him"; "Acausality (Type 5) Nigh-Omnipresence" has an apostrophe missing.

Intelligence: No error, just feel that adding that he lived for millions of years, and that he understand every one of the infinite concepts and laws that make up reality would be needed. (This only applies to his last key)

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